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Well, here is the Mary Sue test with my characters' answers! If I put only one answer, it means the answer is the same for all characters. And remember, everyone here except Nyoka and Kender is from my fanfiction, not the RPG. (Nyoka is also in my fanfiction, but with a very small role. And he's American. So I used the RPG version of him instead.)
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1: Character Basics: Name, Age, Appearance
Is your character named after you in any way?
No - 0 points
Is he named for someone you know or admire?
Cody DeDannan: No - 0 points
Samantha DeDannan: No - 0 points
Kathy Skinner: Yes - 1 point (First name from a friend of mine)
Kyle Tiller: No - 0 points
Dustin Tiller: No - 0 points
Tony Barado: No - 0 points
Nyoka Bronwen: No - 0 points
Kender Creevey: No - 0 points
Would (or have you) you give a pet or child this
name?
No - 0 points
Is the name unusual?
Cody DeDannan: No - 0 points
Samantha DeDannan: No - 0 points
Kathy Skinner: No - 0 points
Kyle Tiller: No - 0 points
Dustin Tiller: No - 0 points
Tony Barado: No - 0 points
Nyoka Bronwen: Yes - 1 point
Kender Creevey: yes - 1 point
Is the name the same or suspiciously like that
of a canon character?
No - 0 points
Is his name in the title of the story?
No - 0 points
How long did you spend choosing your character's
name?
No one took that long - 0 points
Is this character basis for others?
Cody DeDannan: Yes - 1 point (It's his story,
mostly, the others were created for the story.)
Samantha DeDannan: No - 0 pointd
Kathy Skinner: No - 0 points
Kyle Tiller: No - 0 points
Dustin Tiller: No - 0 points
Tony Barado: No - 0 points
Nyoka Bronwen: No - 0 points
Kender Creevey: No - 0 points
Is he the same gender as you?
Cody DeDannan: Yes - 1 point
Samantha DeDannan: No - 0 points
Kathy Skinner: No - 0 points
Kyle Tiller: Yes - 1 point
Dustin Tiller: Yes - 1 point
Tony Barado: Yes - 1 point
Nyoka Bronwen: Yes - 1 point
Kender Creevey: Yes - 1 point
Is he a Muggle or a Squib?
Cody DeDannan: No - 0 points
Samantha DeDannan: Yes - 0 points
Kathy Skinner: No - 0 points
Kyle Tiller: No - 0 points
Dustin Tiller: No - 0 points
Tony Barado: No -0 points
Nyoka Bronwen: No - 0 points
Kender Creevey: No - 0 points
Is he a mix of two different species?
Cody DeDannan: No - 0 points
Samantha DeDannan: No - 0 points
Kathy Skinner: No - 0 points
Kyle Tiller: No - 0 points
Dustin Tiller: No - 0 points
Tony Barado: No - 0 points
Nyoka Bronwen: No - 0 points
Kender Creevey: Yes - 3 points (he is part house-elf.)
Is your character a magical beast or being that
is not mentioned in canon?
No - 0 points
Is he a teen or in his early twenties?
Cody DeDannan: No - 0 points
Samantha DeDannan: No - 0 points
Kathy Skinner: Yes - 1 point
Kyle Tiller: Yes - 1 point
Dustin Tiller: Yes - 1 point
Tony Barado: No - 0 points
Nyoka Bronwen: No - 0 points
Kender Creevey: No - 0 points
Is he another age but looks like a teen,
or someone in his early twenties?
No - 0 points
Is he your age or the age you want to be?
Cody DeDannan: Yes - 1 point
Samantha DeDannan: No - 0 points
Kathy Skinner: No - 0 points
Kyle Tiller: No - 0 points
Dustin Tiller: No - 0 points
Tony Barado: No - 0 points
Nyoka Bronwen: No - 0 points
Kender Creevey: No - 0 points
Is he handsome, cute, or pretty?
Cody DeDannan: Yes - 2 points
Samantha DeDannan: No - 0 points
Kathy Skinner: No - 0 points
Kyle Tiller: No - 0 points
Dustin Tiller: No - 0 points
Tony Barado: No - 0 points
Nyoka Bronwen: Yes - 2 points
Kender Creevey: No - 0 points
Does he have unusual eyes, hair, markings, or
other unusual trait?
Cody DeDannan: No - 0 points
Samantha DeDannan: No - 0 points
Kathy Skinner: No - 0 points
Kyle Tiller: No - 0 points
Dustin Tiller: No - 0 points
Tony Barado: No - 0 points
Nyoka Bronwen: Yes - while of African and Indian descent, and having dark hair and skin, his eyes are bright green. - 1 point
Kender Creevey: Yes, he has pointed ears. - 1 point
Is he from a country other than England?
Cody DeDannan: Yes, he is from America - 3 points
Samantha DeDannan: Yes, she is from America - 3 points
Kathy Skinner: No - 0 points
Kyle Tiller: No - 0 points
Dustin Tiller: No - 0 points
Tony Barado: Yes, he is from America - 3 points
Nyoka Bronwen: He was born in England, but spent a great deal of time in both Africa and india, so I am giving him 1 point.
Kender Creevey: Yes, he is from Scotland. - 1
point
2: Details: Background, Duties, Personality
Did the character have a traumatic past?
(Include all that apply.)
No - 0 points
NOTE: These are not necessarily ranked by how bad they are, though that is part of it. These are ranked according to what many Mary Sue characters tend to have. For example, many Mary Sue characters tend to have slavery or sexual abuse in their backgrounds; those who do tend to be more of a Mary-Sue type of character.
Is he a relative of a canon character?
Cody DeDannan: No - 0 points
Samantha DeDannan: No - 0 points
Kathy Skinner: No - 0 points
Kyle Tiller: No - 0 points
Dustin Tiller: No - 0 points
Tony Barado: No - 0 points
Nyoka Bronwen: No - 0 points
Kender Creevey: Yes, he is a cousin to the Creevey brothers - 2 points
NOTE: Again, these characters are the ones I personally see the most Mary Sues connected with.
Is your character a descendant of Merlin, or King
Arthur, or another equable personage? (Fictional
or real)
No - 0 points
Is your character adopted, or live with people
not his parents?
Cody DeDannan: Yes - 1 point
Samantha DeDannan: Yes - 1 point
Kathy Skinner: No - 0 points
Kyle Tiller: No - 0 points
Dustin Tiller: No - 0 points
Tony Barado: No - 0 points
Nyoka Bronwen: No - 0 points
Kender Creevey: No - 0 points
Is he the last surviving member of his family
line?
No - 0 points
Did he have an important or unusual birth?
No - 0 points
Does your character live at Hogwarts, 12 Grimmauld
Place, or any other significant place in HP canon?
Cody DeDannan: He does not start out there, or
even get there within the first five years at Hogwarts. but Cody
does end up at Grimmauld Place eventually, so I am giving him 1 point
Samantha DeDannan: She does not start out there, or even get there within Cody's first five years at Hogwarts. But along with Cody, she does end up at Grimmauld Place eventually, so I am giving her 1 point
Kathy Skinner: No - 0 points
Kyle Tiller: No - 0 points
Dustin Tiller: No - 0 points
Tony Barado: No - 0 points
Nyoka Bronwen: No - 0 points
Kender Creevey: No - 0 points
Was he banished from his town, family, species,
etc.?
No - 0 points
Is he nobility of any kind?
No - 0 points
Is your character a mentor, nanny, or guardian
to any of the major canon characters?
No - 0 points
Is he one of twins or other multiple births?
No - 0 points
Does he have a terrible guilt about something
in the past? (choose all that apply)
Cody DeDannan: At one point, Cody does feel very
guilty about something that's not really his fault. But it's not
a huge part of the story, and doesn;t happen until his sixth year.
So I am giving him 1 point/
Samantha DeDannan: No - 0 points
Kathy Skinner: No - 0 points
Kyle Tiller: No - 0 points
Dustin Tiller: No - 0 points
Tony Barado: No - 0 points
Nyoka Bronwen: No - 0 points
Kender Creevey: No - 0 points
Is he a spy or a double-agent?
No - 0 points
Are his moral/religious/cultural beliefs and traditions
very similar or the same as yours?
Cody DeDannan: Yes - 1 point
Samantha DeDannan: Yes - 1 points
Kathy Skinner: Yes, mostly - 1 point
Kyle Tiller: Yes, mostly - 1 point
Dustin Tiller: No - 0 points
Tony Barado: not really - 0 points
Nyoka Bronwen: No - 0 points
Kender Creevey: No - 0 points
Does he do the same things as you for fun?
Cody DeDannan: Yes - 1 point
Samantha DeDannan: No - 0 points
Kathy Skinner: No - 0 points
Kyle Tiller: No - 0 points
Dustin Tiller: No - 0 points
Tony Barado: No - 0 points
Nyoka Bronwen: No - 0 points
Kender Creevey: Yes - 1 point
Does he do the same work as you?
No - 0 points
Does he have a psychosis, personality trait, major
quirk, or habit that is the same as you?
Cody DeDannan: Yes - hyperactivity, curiosity,
love af adventure - 1 point
Samantha DeDannan: No - 0 points
Kathy Skinner: No - 0 points
Kyle Tiller: No - 0 points
Dustin Tiller: No - 0 points
Tony Barado: No - 0 points
Nyoka Bronwen: No - 0 points
Kender Creevey: Yes - hyperactivity, love of music, love of adventure and exploring, coriosity (even worse than Cody) - 1 point
3: Powers and Abilities
Does your character sing, draw, dance, act, or
play an instrument well?
Cody DeDannan: No - 0 points
Samantha DeDannan: No - 0 points
Kathy Skinner: Yes - 1 point (she draws)
Kyle Tiller: No - 0 points
Dustin Tiller: No - 0 points
Tony Barado: No - 0 points
Nyoka Bronwen: No - 0 points
Kender Creevey: Yes, he plays the bagpipes. he's not wonderful, but he's not too bad - 1 point
Is your character trickier than the twins, wiser
than Dumbledore, or more evil than Voldemort? (And so on)
No - 0 points
Can he do magic without a wand?
No - 0 points
Is he psychic? (Twin-type
telepathy and Legilimency count.)
No - 0 points
Is he an animagus or a metamorphmagus? (all
that apply)
No - 0 points
Is he a non-human who uses a wand and magic?
No - 0 points
Is he a Seer? (all
that apply)
No - 0 points
Is he an Auror or a Death Eater?
Cody DeDannan: No - 0 points
Samantha DeDannan: No - 0 points
Kathy Skinner: No - 0 points
Kyle Tiller: No - 0 points
Dustin Tiller: Yes - he is new to the ranks, but he is a Death Eater - 1 point
Tony Barado: He is not an Auror, but is of comparable rank - 1 point
Nyoka Bronwen: Yes (Death Eater) - 1 point
Kender Creevey: No - 0 points
Is he a natural leader?
Cody DeDannan: No - 0 points
Samantha DeDannan: No - 0 points
Kathy Skinner: No - 0 points
Kyle Tiller: No - 0 points
Dustin Tiller: No - 0 points
Tony Barado: Yes - 1 point
Nyoka Bronwen: No - 0 points
Kender Creevey: No - 0 points
Are animals unusually attracted to him?
No - 0 points
Does your character have immunity to things that
would affect normal members of his species?
No - 0 points
Does he know magic beyond what he normally should,
such as spells beyond his age/grade level, or spells that citizens don't
normally learn, or things that a good guy would not use often?
Cody DeDannan: Yes - he learned more advanced
stuff through the D.A. - 3 points
Samantha DeDannan: No - 0 points
Kathy Skinner: No - 0 points
Kyle Tiller: No - 0 points
Dustin Tiller: No - 0 points
Tony Barado: No - 0 points
Nyoka Bronwen: No - 0 points
Kender Creevey: No - 0 points
Does he attend Hogwarts (or any wizarding secondary
school) before or after the normal age?
Cody DeDannan: Oh yeah - 2 points
Samantha DeDannan: No - 0 points
Kathy Skinner: No - 0 points
Kyle Tiller: No - 0 points
Dustin Tiller: No - 0 points
Tony Barado: No - 0 points
Nyoka Bronwen: No - 0 points
Kender Creevey: No - 0 points
Does he teach at Hogwarts?
No - 0 points
Does he have an ability not mentioned in canon?
(all
that apply)
Cody DeDannan: No - 0 points
Samantha DeDannan: No - 0 points
Kathy Skinner: No - 0 points
Kyle Tiller: No - 0 points
Dustin Tiller: No - 0 points
Tony Barado: No - 0 points (In fact, he can't even Apparate)
Nyoka Bronwen: Yes - 3 points Nyoka is a psyvamp, he gets power from the emotions of others. It helps fuel his magic; the stronger the emotion, the more power. Wizards are better fodder for this energy-feeding.
Kender Creevey: No - 0 points
4: The Plot Thickens
NOTE: For any child/minor characters, substitute sex and lover-related things with family and adoption-like things.
Do any of the canon characters find your character
attractive?
Cody DeDannan: Yes, a lot of the good guys think
he's cute. (It offends him, though!) - 1 point
Samantha DeDannan: No - 0 points
Kathy Skinner: No - 0 points
Kyle Tiller: No - 0 points
Dustin Tiller: No - 0 points
Tony Barado: No - 0 points
Nyoka Bronwen: No - 0 points (at least no one has said so.)
Kender Creevey: No - 0 points (at least no one has said so.)
Does your character end up being popular?
No - 0 points
Does your character fall in love with or have
sex with Harry or his parents, Dumbledore, Voldemort, Malfoy (either of
the males), Snape, Lupin, Hermione, Ron, or Sirius?
Cody DeDannan: He ends up with a family type
relationship with lupin - 3 points
Samantha DeDannan: She ends up with a family type relationship with lupin - 3 points
Kathy Skinner: No - 0 points
Kyle Tiller: No - 0 points
Dustin Tiller: No - 0 points
Tony Barado: No - 0 points
Nyoka Bronwen: No - 0 points
Kender Creevey: No - 0 points
Does your character fall in love with or have
sex with other fairly prevalent characters like Neville, Hagrid, McGonagall,
Lockhart, etc.?
No - 0 points
Does your character fall in love with or have
sex with a very minor character like Avery, Theodore Nott, Parvati Patil,
Professor Sinistra, Filch, or the giant squid?
No - 0 points
Does your story end with or revolve around your
character's wedding to said canon character?
No - 0 points
Is the story primarily about your character?
Cody DeDannan: Yes - 4 points
Samantha DeDannan: No - 0 points
Kathy Skinner: No - 0 points
Kyle Tiller: No - 0 points
Dustin Tiller: No - 0 points
Tony Barado: No - 0 points
Nyoka Bronwen: No - 0 points
Kender Creevey: No - 0 points
If not, then is he introduced on the first page?
Cody DeDannan: N/A
Samantha DeDannan: Yes - 2 points
Kathy Skinner: No - 0 points
Kyle Tiller: No - 0 points
Dustin Tiller: No - 0 points
Tony Barado: No - 0 points
Nyoka Bronwen: N/A (RPG character)
Kender Creevey: N/A (RPG character)
Does your character meet the main canon characters
of the plot and become friends with them after a bit of tension and suspense?
Cody DeDannan: yes, he eventually earns the trust
of the main Gryffindors - 2 points
Samantha DeDannan: No - 0 points
Kathy Skinner: No - 0 points
Kyle Tiller: No - 0 points
Dustin Tiller: No - 0 points
Tony Barado: No - 0 points
Nyoka Bronwen: No - 0 points
Kender Creevey: No - 0 points
Does he befriend a villain, despite the fact that
he's a good guy? Or befriend a good guy despite being a villain?
Cody DeDannan: Well, Cody does make friends with
both Gryffindors and Slytherins...but especially later on in the story,
this causes a lot of tension in Slytherin House, and even a bit in Gryffindor.
So 1 point
Samantha DeDannan: No - 0 points
Kathy Skinner: No - 0 points
Kyle Tiller: No - 0 points
Dustin Tiller: No - 0 points
Tony Barado: No - 0 points
Nyoka Bronwen: No - 0 points
Kender Creevey: No - 0 points
Does the character that you befriend change sides
because of your character?
No - 0 points
Does your character change sides instead?
No - 0 points
Does your character save the day or someone's
life?
No - 0 points
If he dies, does everyone go into mourning?
N/A
If he dies, is he resurrected by the end of the
story?
N/A
Does he have a rare, unusual, important, or very
powerful artifact? (Wands count.)
No - 0 points (Unless you count Kender's
bagpipes which if played badly can bring a man to his knees! hee hee hee!)
Does his wand share the same components as Harry's
or Voldemort's?
Cody DeDannan: Phoenix feather - 1 point
Samantha DeDannan: N/A
Kathy Skinner: No - 0 points
Kyle Tiller: No - 0 points
Dustin Tiller: Yes - 1 point
Tony Barado: 0 points
Nyoka Bronwen: No - 0 points
Kender Creevey: No - 0 points
5: You and Your Shadow: Stuff About Your World
NOTE: As before, with child characters, substitute things like sex and marriage for adoption and family-type love.
Do you start your character off in the same town
or neighborhood where you live?
No - 0 points
Do you bring the canon characters into your town
or neighborhood?
No - 0 points
Do you get to meet your custom character and/or
the canon characters?
No - 0 points
Did you write or have you written a sequel about
your character?
Cody DeDannan: Kind of. I wrote his first
five years, and will continue when the books come out - 1 point
Samantha DeDannan: No - 0 points
Kathy Skinner: No - 0 points
Kyle Tiller: No - 0 points
Dustin Tiller: No - 0 points
Tony Barado: No - 0 points
Nyoka Bronwen: N/A
Kender Creevey: N/A
Do you truly wish you were a wizard?
Yes! - 1 point
Is your character someone you would be friends
with in real life?
Cody DeDannan: Yes - 1 point
Samantha DeDannan: Yes - 1 point
Kathy Skinner: Yes - 1 point
Kyle Tiller: Yes - 1 point
Dustin Tiller: No - 0 points
Tony Barado: Yes - 1 point
Nyoka Bronwen: No - 0 points
Kender Creevey: No - 0 points
Do you think that people who read your story should
like your character?
Cody DeDannan: Yes - 1 point
Samantha DeDannan: No - 0 points
Kathy Skinner: Yes - 1 point
Kyle Tiller: No - 0 points
Dustin Tiller: No - 0 points
Tony Barado: Yes - 1 point
Nyoka Bronwen: No - 0 points
Kender Creevey: Yes - 1 point
If people do not like your character, do you take
it personally?
Cody DeDannan: Yes - 2 points
Samantha DeDannan: No - 0 points
Kathy Skinner: No - 0 points
Kyle Tiller: No - 0 points
Dustin Tiller: No - 0 points
Tony Barado: No - 0 points
Nyoka Bronwen: No - 0 points
Kender Creevey: No - 0 points
Is this a character you would like a sexual, matrimonial,
or family relationship with?
Cody DeDannan: Yes (family) - 2 points
Samantha DeDannan: No - 0 points
Kathy Skinner: No - 0 points
Kyle Tiller: No - 0 points
Dustin Tiller: No - 0 points
Tony Barado: No - 0 points
Nyoka Bronwen: No - 0 points
Kender Creevey: No - 0 points
Do you ever pretend that you are your character,
along with all his abilities, powers, and other circumstances?
Cody DeDannan: Yes (RPG) - 3 points
Samantha DeDannan: Yes (RPG) - 3 points
Kathy Skinner: No - 0 points
Kyle Tiller: Yes (RPG) - 3 points
Dustin Tiller: Yes (RPG) - 3 points
Tony Barado: No - 0 points
Nyoka Bronwen: Yes (RPG) - 3 points
Kender Creevey: Yes (RPG) - 3 points
Do you have a roleplaying game based on this character?
No - 0 points
Have you ever made or planned to make a drawing,
figurine or action figure of your character?
Cody DeDannan: Yes (drawing, mine) - 2
points
Samantha DeDannan: Yes (drawing, mine) - 2 points
Kathy Skinner: Yes (drawing, mine) - 2 points
Kyle Tiller: Yes (drawing, mine) - 2 points
Dustin Tiller: Yes (drawing, mine) - 2 points
Tony Barado: Yes (drawing, mine, I plan to at some point) - 2 points
Nyoka Bronwen: Yes (drawing, mine) - 2 points
Kender Creevey: Yes (drawing, mine) - 2 points
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